A guest blog post by Ron Finklestein
I receive dozens of marketing emails monthly. I take action
on almost all of them. I delete, unsubscribe or block as spam.
1. Create
a boring subject or create a subject that is not engaging or truthful. You need
to think of the subject as the headline of a sales letter. If the headline is
not reflective of the email, engaging or otherwise noteworthy, I simply delete
it.
2. Don’t
tell me where you are located, how many employees you have, or the technology
you use. I don’t care. I will only care about those things when you give me a
reason to care. Otherwise it is just noise that I have to try to understand. Just
tell why I should care by answering this question: what’s in it for me. The
other pieces will take care of themselves.
3. Do
not write long email. Keep is short. I don’t want to or have time to read a
long sales letter. Just tell why we should do business together. If I have
interest, I will ask for the supporting documentation.
4. Don’t
use fancy prose or make comments that are not real. Be authentic, thoughtful
and real. I once received and email from someone and I was going to call them,
until I read the last line. It said, “We will triple your business.” I knew
they could not do that. Especially since they were not selling, they were
marketing. If they said something like “we will triple the amount of web
traffic”, I could have accepted that. If you feel compelled to make a comment,
support your comment with documentation, testimonials, facts or endorsements.
5. Don’t
make me look for contact info. Make your contact info easy to find and give me
the web site so I can do some research to see if I am really interested.
6. Don’t
use endorsements that are not real or lack credibility. I once asked to speak with
a client who worked with this company to see if they would deliver on their
promises. I was told we do not give out customer info. I ask them to send my
contact info to selected customer and have them contact me. They would not do
that. I finally asked for some testimonials. The testimonials were so weak and
so badly written I was embarrassed to receive them.
Selling via email is no different than writing a direct mail
piece. The same rules apply. Keep it simply. Be honest. Tell me why I need to
care about what you do. Tell me why you are the expert. Finally, prove that you
can do what you say.
Ron Finklestein
Business Growth Experience
ron@businessgrowthexperience.com
330-990-0788
Helping Business Owners Grow, Prosper and Get Results.
Business Growth Experience
ron@businessgrowthexperience.com
330-990-0788
Helping Business Owners Grow, Prosper and Get Results.

